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#31 Thu 02 Sep 10 11:28pm

madamada

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Occupation living life
From Friuli northern Italy
Member since Mon 14 Jan 08

Re: the neverending homemade haiku thread

How empty does our garden look
without the  old birchs' shade
a  quince could  take their place

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#32 Fri 03 Sep 10 3:25am

JoyYamDaisy

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From Melbourne Australia
Member since Sun 12 Apr 09

Re: the neverending homemade haiku thread

Lovely Mada! smile  smile

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#33 Sat 04 Sep 10 8:34pm

whitedog

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Occupation striving to be a better human
From america
Member since Sat 09 Feb 08

Re: the neverending homemade haiku thread

Roach masacre in my big pot in the sink this morning, bad for me who won't kill them on purpose, hope I don't drown in hell later

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#34 Tue 07 Sep 10 1:46pm

madamada

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Occupation living life
From Friuli northern Italy
Member since Mon 14 Jan 08

Re: the neverending homemade haiku thread

an elderly man with his fauvish/mauvish (?) little dog
sitting on a bench near the graveyard entrance
a young mum feeding her baby right there
a little later

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#35 Tue 07 Sep 10 7:03pm

whitedog

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From america
Member since Sat 09 Feb 08

Re: the neverending homemade haiku thread

My kittens like the homemade turkey, so I gave some to the pitbull under the big maple tree where I sit with him. We are all kindreds.

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#36 Tue 01 Mar 11 9:20am

Grandmadamada

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Member since Fri 19 Nov 10

Re: the neverending homemade haiku thread

you'll keep hold of your youth
as long as you stop quiet
and listen to the mighty beauty
of a blooming daffodil

would you say keep hold (??)
looking for corrections and suggestion

haiku makers  help you are free to put your hands in those words as if they were ingredients of a recipe, I just wanted to make  dish while waiting or to celebrate spring wink

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#37 Tue 01 Mar 11 9:52am

shammrok

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Occupation Growing things
From Up the garden path...Tasmania
Member since Thu 02 Sep 04

Re: the neverending homemade haiku thread

you'll keep astride of your youth
as long as you be still
and listen to the unfolding beauty
of a blooming daffodil.

Mada?

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#38 Tue 01 Mar 11 11:08am

JoyYamDaisy

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From Melbourne Australia
Member since Sun 12 Apr 09

Re: the neverending homemade haiku thread

Brilliant Frizz! big_smile

Edit:  oops  oops  oops  Shammy  oops  oops  oops  oops

Last edited by JoyYamDaisy (Wed 02 Mar 11 12:11am)

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#39 Tue 01 Mar 11 1:02pm

Grandmadamada

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Member since Fri 19 Nov 10

Re: the neverending homemade haiku thread

big_smile  thumbsup
grazie shammy

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#40 Tue 01 Mar 11 2:34pm

Grandmadamada

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Member since Fri 19 Nov 10

Re: the neverending homemade haiku thread

a blooming  bunch of daffodils
shows silent its beauty in the wind
to wake up your hidden youth wink  roll

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