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#1 Fri 16 Mar 07 9:23am

Law_1987

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From Guangzhou, China
Member since Thu 01 Mar 07

We Love Poetry *_*

I love poetry!
I read and I write.
I hope we can appreciate poems together and exchange views.
When I leave my peoms here bravely, I hope you can remark them frankly.
I also welcome your works and words anytime. big_smile

Last edited by Law_1987 (Fri 16 Mar 07 9:35am)

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#2 Fri 16 Mar 07 9:35am

Law_1987

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Re: We Love Poetry *_*

CHILDHOOD
               The tear down childhood's cheek that flows
               Is like the dew - drop on the rose;
               When next the summer breeze comes by,
               And waves the bush, the flower is dry.
                                                                ----- Walter Scott

Please treasure what you are having in hand. Even if it is bitter and it is hard, so long as you are not dying, you will get over it. Then all the bitterness and difficulty become the precious memory in heart.

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#3 Mon 19 Mar 07 11:51am

Law_1987

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Re: We Love Poetry *_*

LUCY

                         She dwelt among the untrodden ways
                               Beside the srings of Dove;
                         A maid whom there were none to praise,
                               And very few to love.

                         A violet by a mossy stone
                               Half-hidden from the eye!
                         Fair as a star, when only one
                               Is shining in the sky.
               
                         She lived unknown, and few could know
                               When Lucy ceased to be;
                         But she is in her grave, and O!
                                The difference to me!

                                                           ------ William Wordsworth

PS: Extremely love ' she is in her grave, and O!   The difference to me! '.

      When someone or something I used to have suddenly no longer exists, maybe it is absolutely not count to me, I think of it, and I still feel an instantaneous vacuity, probably because its place has been replaced by an  O .

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#4 Fri 23 Mar 07 7:38am

Law_1987

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Re: We Love Poetry *_*

big_smile It's my work! A poem from Law_1987.

                                          MON AMOUR                     
                                 
                                Mon amour!
                                You had to be at the shore
                                And picked up a shell,
                                And picked up our sweet menory.
   
                                Mon amour!
                                You had to be in the trees
                                And took away a leaf,
                                And took away our little worry.

                                Mon amour!
                                Then where would you be?
                                You have no wings
                                So you can't fly across the sky!

                                But you went quietly by the lake,
                                Held a handful of water
                                And you owned the clouds.
                                                             
                                                          --------Law_1987

A few days ago, one of my teachers, Rainer, taught me a french word
" Mon amour". It means "my lover". And it inspired me to write this peom. I am quite confident in the feeling I'd made, but I'm not sure whether the tense and words are right. For example the tense of " You had to be at the shore" and " where would you be". And I'm not sure the words in " held a handful of water".
I frankly welcome your remarks and suggestion.
Thank you very much!

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#5 Thu 29 Mar 07 2:23pm

Vasia

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Re: We Love Poetry *_*

That'a really nice poem Law!!
Congratulations!!!!!! thumbsup
And it's nice that you are sharing it with us!

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#6 Fri 30 Mar 07 2:19pm

emmylu

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Member since Mon 20 Nov 06

Re: We Love Poetry *_*

hey Law... i love your poem. i like to write as well. i will post up my own stuff later, but i thought i would share this with you first. not sure if you would call it a poem, but its very meaningful. hope ya like it the way i do
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xxx

Your presence is   
a present to the world.
You're unique and
one of a kind.
Your life can be what you
want it to be.
Take the days just
one day at a time.

Count your blessings,
not your troubles.
You'll make it through
whatever comes along
Within you are so many
answers.
Understand, have courage,
be strong

Realise that it's never
too late.
Do ordinary things
in an extrodinary way.
Have health and hope
and happpiness.
Take the time to wish
upon a star.

And don't ever forget.....
for even a day.....
how very special you are.

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